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The Last Train
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:34:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I shall not fear thee,
As I used to.
I shall not resent thee,
When those I love are taken.
My anger of loss and silence,
Is blended with curiosity and envy,
However your shadow veils me,
In great heartrate and unknown stages.
Sensations I may wish not to endure,
A peaceful calm, I hope to find
Upon my journey.
Thought may spiral to those behind me,
As I was then, how one desolves
and leaves sweet little visions,
odours and tones.
However you arrive, I may fight thee,
In case you were mistaken
But finaly,when the last train has passed,
I will invite thee and a sigh of relief,
as my curiosity is laid to rest.
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x_midnight_x
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2004-08-06 04:34:04]
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Re: The Last Train
(User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:41:38 AM AEST
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| That's an interesting attitude you have towards death...it makes for an intriguing piece of poetry, for which I think you deserve 5 stars. |
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Re: The Last Train
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:50:02 AM AEST
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I agree with Avarice_riot..very interesting write.
Well wrapped. venkat |
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Re: The Last Train
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by all4jesus_teen on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:57:18 AM AEST
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| Good work! Interesting and unusual. |
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Re: The Last Train
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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| excellent write by any standards. |
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