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Fading hope
Contributed by
Xion_alXar
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 03:24:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You told me it was ok to love,
That I should give my feelings a shove.
You didn't mention how it would hurt,
Out of the walls and comfort,
That I had made to hide away,
From the world and all it's evil ways.
So I let my walls down,
And almost had a breakdown,
With all the unfamiliar emotions,
Swirling around like demons.
Confusing, twisting, and tormenting me,
But I still say surely,
That I would not trade it,
To be back in the pit,
Of numb and nothing,
That I had been in hiding.
When I see you smile,
It makes everything else worthwhile.
Inside of you I've seen the light,
When I thought it was premenately twilight.
I dream of nothing but you,
The whole day and night through.
I dream of being near, holding, touching, kissing,
My dreams remain even as the last hope is fading.
Someday maybe we can be together...
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Xion_alXar
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2004-08-06 03:24:13]
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Re: Fading hope
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:19:56 AM AEST
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Such longing in this verse. The pain of lost hope can rip you to pieces. You have expressed those feelings beautifully in this verse. Awesome poem.
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Re: Fading hope
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:28:29 AM AEST
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This is a nice write. And describes your feelings well. Take care
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