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Fooled
Contributed by
Row
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Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 02:52:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Confirmed my fears
No longer shall i wonder
Instead just fill my eyes with tears
And feel going under
I dont know if I can call you friend
Loved you, broke me
Loved you still, broke me again
Dont think I dont know
You cant hide it
Can I ever trust your little show?
Just a fad was I?
Nothing more than a brief lovin
Beautiful you were to my blind eye
I can see now, I was nothing
I was fooled
Copyright ©
Row
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2004-08-06 02:52:15]
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Re: Fooled
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 06:16:14 AM AEST
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Wonderfully expressed emotions in this verse. Feeling your sadness and disappointment. Great write.
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Re: Fooled
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 10:04:16 PM AEST
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Great work. Seems like ur getting heaps better
every time you write.
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Re: Fooled
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:00:05 AM AEST
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| ...well... considering the poem is about me i feel insulted.No i wouldnt call it insulted more like hurt. But atleast i can see its about me. |
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