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love no longer
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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sitting alone
heart as cold as stone
remebering the night
where you gave me light
the touch of your hand
pressed lighlty against my skin
your tender touch
i miss so much
all through the night
my dreams take flight
the world melts away
removing my fears
holding back tears
i held your hand
i wait for the feel again
nothing comes i can not mend
i hold on to the moment you whispered in my ear
the words i longed to hear
i should have held tighter
the night you slipped away....
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... [
2004-08-05 23:56:24]
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Re: love no longer
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:19:30 AM AEST
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Hind sight is always better than fore sight.
this is a very touching, moving write.
even tho there's sadness in it there also much wisdom learned.
Hang tuff, my firend 'cause we are only human not meant to be perfect.
Please be kinder to your self.
Luv, hugs, faith, hope, strength,
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Re: love no longer
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:07:37 PM AEST
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| the poem isn't about someone dying, but about lost love the person i am tryign to write about did not come to a tragic end but found saomeone new, hes died inside of me and left me to mourn |
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