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The Poem Never Written In the Arms Of Compassion
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:36:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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clouded clarity
forgotten troubles
love and hate
but its to late
ive done my sin
compassion in mind
you had to run
i wasnt done
now you'll pay
for ignoring me
i've got a knife
you've got a life
you wept a waste
you cried for nothing
you lost life
with my knife
the gasps of air
the collapsing lungs
i hold the weapon
what have i done
the blood is nothing
the screams just whispers
all you hear
isn't real
death has come
to do it's work
i wasn't your slave
now your tears fall on my grave
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
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2004-08-05 23:36:48]
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Re: The Poem Never Written In the Arms Of Compassion
(User Rating: 1 )
by waos on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:40:03 PM AEST
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| wow that is amazing. i can relate to that. not a happy thing to relate to but nonetheless its true. that is very good. the last 2 lines are really good. that is a very sad poem but most of the time those are the best ones. |
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Re: The Poem Never Written In the Arms Of Compassion
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by waos on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:40:04 PM AEST
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| wow that is amazing. i can relate to that. not a happy thing to relate to but nonetheless its true. that is very good. the last 2 lines are really good. that is a very sad poem but most of the time those are the best ones. |
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