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12
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:28:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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12 cracked stones
lie helplessly on the path of life to be forgotten
12 lost souls
deep in the corners of hell left and rotting
12 fake masks
you've hidden behind for the past few times
12 big steps
of yours have overpassed my final line
12 final times
your curses i have forgotten and ignored
12 more lies
will i sustain, and then some more
12 blood drops
fall of the knife you embedded in my heart
12 wet tears
run down your cheeks breaking apart
12 white lies
you told me o'er and o'er, through and through
12 small words
"forever and ever, i swear to my Lord, that I love you..."
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
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2004-08-05 23:28:16]
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Re: 12
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by waos on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:43:42 PM AEST
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| i liked this one even more than the other one of yours that i read. it's really good. thank you for posting it. both of yours i read twice and still did not have enough of it. that good. |
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Re: 12
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by waos on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:43:43 PM AEST
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| i liked this one even more than the other one of yours that i read. it's really good. thank you for posting it. both of yours i read twice and still did not have enough of it. that good. |
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