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Broken
Contributed by
waos
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:26:15 PM in AEST
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There's a trail behind us,
barely beaten down.
Soaked in the mire of pain.
There used to be a trust,
now we drown.
I'm dragging us down again.
Can we, can we carry on?
Have I, have I broken us down?
Strangled growth slows our steps,
hail pelts against our skin;
we're drowning in the flood.
Each effect I cause, it wrecks,
I don't see how we'd ever win;
we're drenched in all my blood.
Can we, can we carry on?
Have I, have I broken us down?
I can't see the path ahead,
should we continue on?
Should I find another way?
I could stop our pain, stop it dead.
I'll be dead and gone.
I'm sorry I blew us away.
Can you, can you carry on?
Have I, have I broken you down?
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waos
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2004-08-05 23:26:15]
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Re: Broken
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by Stew on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:29:39 PM AEST
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i really like this write, especially the line...
can you, can you carry on?
have i, have i broken you down?
it is excellent. please read some of mine.
love forever stew. |
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Re: Broken
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:34:37 PM AEST
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| great write. much emotion. |
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Re: Broken
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 02:48:19 PM AEST
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I LOVE THIS!!!!!! this write is so touching and full of emotion. wonderful job!!!! xoxo
~ riki ~ |
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