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Reborn
Contributed by
rylo
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:39:40 PM in AEST
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Your soul is torn,
And a new life is born.
As you leave a world of fame,
And enter into a world of shame.
A world where darkness carries out through the land,
And minds become turmoil in man.
These were the cards dealt from your hand,
Now you too, live in a darkened land.
Always walking in the shadows,
And living a life so shallow.
Hiding in the night,
And filling others lives with fright.
Waiting in the darkness,
So you too, can send a darkened kiss.
This is the life,
That was promised to be so bliss.
2004 Copyright By: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
rylo
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2004-08-05 17:39:40]
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Re: Reborn
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:43:18 PM AEST
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excellent job with the rhyme. good 'plot', loved it. keep it up.
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Re: Reborn
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:47:33 PM AEST
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yes yes yes!!!!!!! Your back!
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Re: Reborn
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:47:32 PM AEST
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| i completely loved this piece. |
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Re: Reborn
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 04:32:55 AM AEST
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| Amazing that you have so much talent.your work is like a work of art. |
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Re: Reborn
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 06:47:54 PM AEST
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| Awesome write! The last stanza was especially great. Nice work. |
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