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~Darkened Road~3
Contributed by
LoelIntrepid
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:55:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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~Step into tha unknown as your mind loses control and rage takes hold~
~Breath in light and not waver your sight for to this night you may die~
~Take up defence though your blood may spill as you fear your souls peril~
~All is right in others sight lying cold then slow tha heart tha world shakened apart
while holding back tears of regret but fate not yet met~
~Now seeking knowing not of peace for dreams are so given by forsakened means~
~Sending your sight to tha ground feeling now as though you shall never be found and
forever bound~
~A life so unmade though afaid to lose tha past comes a escapeing laugh~
~Coverned by that of what was joy only in loseing yourself to become something more
to then fall to darkness within leaving only that of sin though with a grin so welcoming in~
~Imbracing nothing of what you were and not wishing for nothing in return, alone among
a darkened dawn for which you did so create but now forever knowing your place~
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LoelIntrepid
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2004-08-05 14:55:38]
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Re: ~Darkened Road~3
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by richcol7522 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:20:49 PM AEST
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| Awsome write... You said a whole lot in your words. good write. |
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Re: ~Darkened Road~3
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:30:07 PM AEST
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"SENDING YOUR SIGHT TO THA GROUND FEELING NOW AS THOUGH YOU SHALL NEVER BE FOUND AND FOREVER BOUND"
I LOVE THAT PART - YOU ROCK - GREAT POEM- I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH - THANK YOU |
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Re: ~Darkened Road~3
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:18:28 PM AEST
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"VER NICELY WRITEN" So much dispare, The darkness surrounds every word you share. Your "Dark Poetry" Is by far the best I've seen so far. Your use of words are well thought of. You get the readers attention. Feeling as if i was there. As if these were my thoughts. "GREAT JOB". "LoelIntrepid"
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: ~Darkened Road~3
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by Loellntrepid on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 02:05:25 AM AEST
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| ~For as my agony is so simply delt I only shall stand after I did knelt for a will can become dismayed though tha soul forever remains~ |
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