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Contributed by
CBlake
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:57:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Is it wrong when you have thoughts
Of drifting off the earth?
When the one thing you want
Is to have a second birth?
To redo all the wrongs in life
And help to make them right,
Just so at the age of fourteen
You'd be able to sleep at night?
Do you ever feel lost and alone
Like no one seems to care?
Do you ever wish deep down inside
The drama was never there?
Do you ever hope you can turn back time
So you won't have to cry?
Do you too want a special machine
In which God answers "Why?"
Don't you wish it finally ended
Along with all the tears?
Don't you think it's time to go back
And fight away your own fears?
I want it to be over,
And I wish that it would end.
I want to go and hide away,
Or search for life's perfect friend.
And when I find him I'll bring him home
To solve the problems here.
But until that time I'm his stand-in
I deal with all the fear.
Copyright ©
CBlake
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2004-08-05 13:57:33]
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Re: Questions
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:02:42 PM AEST
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great write....thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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Re: Questions
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by Alina on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:45:47 PM AEST
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I think everyone asks themselves this questions. Life is all one big question and we'll never find all the answers no matter how hard we try. Just take life as it throws things at you. Only in heaven will we all find peace. Take care.
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Re: Questions
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:39:00 PM AEST
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| NICE WRITE- BUT DONT LET LIFE GET YOU DOWN- KEEP YOUR HEAD UP |
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Re: Questions
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:47:43 PM AEST
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yes thanks for sharing, such an awesome write. life has a way of making all of us ask this question at some time or another. just keep your chin up and take things in stride. you'll do fine, i can tell from your great talent in writing....
the raven |
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