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Karma
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:41:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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the wind the willows
the whispers
the cries
those dark dark winter nights
the lakes frozen over
rained on by forests of tears
crushed by hail
to a solid mess
left to dwell
on only its mistakes
and time rushes by so fast
nature is blind
only to adapt to change
else its left behind
nothing makes sense
wishing on shooting stars
to be someone else
I think those stars always crash
the hilltops long and high
wolves sing there cries
strength in packs
surrounded by friends
that never notice when they crack
full moons going down
wolves crying last sound
end of night
start of day
karma just revolves
never goes away
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loopylou
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2004-08-05 13:41:21]
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Re: Karma
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:24:12 PM AEST
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Yep day after day after day...
I liked the write, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Karma
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:04:51 PM AEST
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| SO TRUE- SUCH A NICE WRITE- LOVED THE DESCRIPTIONS- KEEP IT UP |
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Re: Karma
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 08:02:01 AM AEST
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This is really nice loopy! Has quite a mystical feel to it. Well the moon always does, the full one that is! :-) Nice job!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Karma
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:34:47 PM AEST
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| amazing write. very true. powerful and written well. |
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