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He called me to say he was Dying
Contributed by
brokensoul
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:08:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Jake: Ashley i have something to say
i lovey ouand im sorry
today will be my last day
i am taking the pills as we speak
i cant handle this pain
im just to weak
Ashley: You say you love me so
then why are you leaving me here
please dont go
you are my only one
but your selfish
why dont you face it instead of run
Jake: In ten minutes call me back
im going to take more pills
i know you think its sanity i lack
yes maybe its true
but one thing is for sure
i will always love you
with that jake hung up the phone
i collapsed on the stairs sobbing
i was all alone
but not even a minute had passed
when my dear friend kole stepped through the door
someone had come to help at last
Kole: Ash why are you crying
sweetie whats the matter
you look like your dying
Ashley: turn the other way
go get kayla
get her i will stay
he rushed out the door
but soon was back
Kayla embraced waiting for what was in store
i told her my story as i shook her arm
she grabbed the phone
told me it was the police i needed to alarm
( on the phone w/ 911)
Ashley: Hello? my friend is going to die
hes going to kill himself
ma'am i swear its no lie
she got his information from me
it took about 12 minutes
she reminded me patients is the key
(on the phone w/ 911)
Operater: Dont worry hun the police are on their way
it will be alright
your friend will be okay
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brokensoul
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2004-08-05 13:08:20]
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Re: He called me to say he was Dying
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:18:02 PM AEST
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wow this is such a sad poem, heart wrenchingly sad, I really hope that your friend will be alright, *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: He called me to say he was Dying
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:21:08 PM AEST
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Nice write, those who call don't want to go, its those who are silent who leave.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: He called me to say he was Dying
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:37:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful...so sad... |
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Re: He called me to say he was Dying
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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sad poem and sad subject.i hope hes alright...he called for help not to die,like what AspenGlow said. but it still hurts...i hope your feeling better.
luv always |
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