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Heartstrings
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:20:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This misery pulls at my heartstrings,
And the meloncholy chords
Reverberate on my lips,
Filling my lungs with sadness.
I can't keep you out of my life,
The scars I carry
Suffocate the love I had for you.
Everyday I wish you were here,
But it never comes,
Like the tears I will never cry.
I try to leave you behind
While the sun sets on my back,
And the cold wind kisses my lips.
The night folds in as I pick up the phone,
This will be the last time I call.
To let you know I'm not alright,
And the emptiness you left behind,
Faded away into the morning;
Promise not to call,
And I promise I won't write
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deadreckoning1983
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2004-08-05 12:20:40]
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Re: Heartstrings
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:23:26 PM AEST
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Awwww this is a very sad write....*hugs*
I am sorry for your pain,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Heartstrings
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:09:19 PM AEST
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Wow!! This is really well written!! Your use of metaphors was great here....
I am sorry for the sad situation tho..... Hope everything works out for you....
Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni |
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Re: Heartstrings
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:49:36 PM AEST
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| i lost a relationship with both my divorced parents and have recently gotten them back. but there is still an absence in my home and my heart. i cannot fathom how much pain you're in but you are more than welcome to write to me and vent. |
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Re: Heartstrings
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 05:40:06 PM AEST
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| :( I came so close to crying when I read this...As you know, my mom isn't in my life either, and it really hit home. I'm so sorry...*sighs* I wish I had a magic wand I could wave and make everything that's bad all better again...= |
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