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Last night I cried
Contributed by
jenny21614
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 10:53:32 AM in AEST
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With each pulse from my heart,
my head pounds harder.
With each breath I take,
my stomach turns over.
A lump grows in my throat.
I grit my teeth,
an effort to compress my tell tale feelings.
Feel the heat rise to my face.
Grow angry with myself for not being able to hold it back.
Let out a defeated whimper,
as one tear multiplies into 400.
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jenny21614
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2004-08-05 10:53:32]
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Re: Last night I cried
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by darkplaidbabe on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 10:57:52 AM AEST
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beautiful write! its very raw and angry yet sad and innocent. it makes me wanna hug you !!! anyway i look forward to more of your writes!
Brynna |
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Re: Last night I cried
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by lilyofthevalley on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:02:51 PM AEST
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| It's a sincere poem, no surplus words. Like it. |
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Re: Last night I cried
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by pyro_88 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:28:59 PM AEST
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| great poem. made me think about a few things. keep it up. |
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Re: Last night I cried
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by KiLin on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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| Crying is one of those things that I think most people take for granted, including myself, and reading your poem made me think about it alot deeper than I usually would..........Thank you! |
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