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Said an Done
Contributed by
A_Corseted_Heart
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 09:35:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I've been a star...
Now I've been scarred.
Beaten, ignored, and thrown away...
But still I live to see another day.
There's all this damage you can't see…
It's all the damage I let him do to me.
From his lips to my ears I heard
"Don't ever change... Stay eternally wild."
Then he raped me inside, turned me into a child.
When I can't close my eyes without seeing him…
How can you touch me and not feel him?!?
He knew once broken, I could never be the same…
Even put back together, you can still see the shame.
In the beginning, never knowing it all…
In the end, still never dreaming how far "Love" could make you fall.
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2004-08-05 09:35:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Said an Done
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 10:10:07 AM AEST (User
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Wow, I really like this one. You put your thoughts and feelings into words so well, I can feel the pain and bitterness. I really relate to this one, but this line really made me think, and that impresses me:
When I can't close my eyes without seeing him…
How can you touch me and not feel him?!?
Awesome write!
~ Moonlit |
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