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Bathing In The Sun
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 09:17:54 AM in AEST
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Lying there beneath the sun, listening to the water run
Children playing in the sand
Others splashing water, waving their hand
While others enjoy the scenery as they stand
Yet others sit and others lay
Some swim and even more play
A cool rushing breeze passes by
As the sand particles land on those that lye
The sun then opens even brighter
The sky bright blue and the sand even whiter
The air is fresh and everywhere is radiantly bright
And in lying here all day, I will take much delight
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Re: Bathing In The Sun
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:21:42 AM AEST
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You bet I do!!!!! Great poem...I loved it......
I am going to spend the whole day Sunday doing just that!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: Bathing In The Sun
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 12:43:45 PM AEST
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| good images, down to the sand landing on the sun bathers. |
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