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Fade away - corrupted minds
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:43:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Lost in a moment, lost in chance,
I’ve been here and there in just a glance,
Now rain pours down on my lonely mind,
My distant heart is hard to find,
It’s all done now, I’ve come to the end,
Don’t need to cry for me my friend,
I’m old and gray, about to expire,
And about to attempt my one desire,
So
Just hold me close,
And kiss my lips,
And hope I don’t fade away,
I’ve played the game, and I’ve been thrown to the floor,
Been abused, used, and called a whore,
Enough’s enough it’s been too long already,
I’m tired of being a repairable teddy,
Raped and assaulted every night,
Don’t think I gave up without a fight,
Take a step back, don’t come too near,
Don’t try to help me make it clear,
So
Hold me up close,
And kiss my lips,
And hope I don’t fade away,
It’s all ***** up, I don’t give a crap,
In life your born right into a trap,
Curled in a cold dark corner all night,
And with the mirror I can’t stand the sight,
Bloody body, heart and wrist,
Shaded mind, all gone to mist,
Slowly lights would call me home,
And once again I was alone,
Copyright ©
corrupted_minds
... [
2004-08-05 05:43:55]
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:14:12 AM AEST
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very dark and sad poem, a great write....
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:23:50 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
luvv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by Row on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:43:44 AM AEST
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| sad but still nice loz |
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by brew on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:42:38 AM AEST
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| Good write...but the words are so sad and deep.To know one can be hurt like that, and one has......its painful! |
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by venkat on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:48:14 AM AEST
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Breath taking and captivating..powerful..and sadly touches the heart. venkat..
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by Dizza_13 on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 02:54:33 AM AEST
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sad but really good. Really got the emotion across.
dizza
xoxoxox |
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by Hakiokusaken on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:50:47 AM AEST
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The expiramental structure came out well and although the poem is troubling it is very good and i would like to read more of your work. Im glad i read it.
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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds
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by cj_ranson on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:55:32 AM AEST
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| reeel good that one, made me feel it inside |
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