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Replacing a mirror...
Contributed by
Living_In_my_dream
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:48:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A million years seems
a few years too long
gives you a chance
to make everything go wrong
Its too long to go around
beating yourself up
making you feel you should
give yourself up
a broken mirror
needs replacing
why am I the person
your forgetting, not facing?
turn around open your eyes
and see...
a person who loves you
that person is me
just take my hand
and hold me tight
Im sick and tired of this
self struggeling fight
Ill try my best
to hold back the tears
remembering how you
helped me fight my fears
your the one who
brought a smile to my face
but your not a mirror
your not something I can replace
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Living_In_my_dream
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2004-08-05 02:48:54]
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Re: Replacing a mirror...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:57:19 AM AEST
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Very creative artisitic write.
Great wok.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Replacing a mirror...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 04:54:19 AM AEST
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good write, straight from the heart,...
pixie xx |
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Re: Replacing a mirror...
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by inoc on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:12:35 AM AEST
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my kind of poem!
thanks for the read
you get a 10 but 5 will have to do! |
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Re: Replacing a mirror...
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by brew on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:19:51 AM AEST
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| Not a bad write........creative, and deep. |
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Re: Replacing a mirror...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 08:42:05 AM AEST
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| interesting write- full of emotion. Nice job |
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Re: Replacing a mirror...
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 09:49:43 AM AEST
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Lovely Write, With Great Rhythm & Flow Througout. Good Work on This Piece, I Enjoyed The Read.
Corinna |
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Re: Replacing a mirror...
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 09:27:07 PM AEST
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I love this! you have a few very strong lines in here
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a broken mirror
needs replacing
why am I the person
your forgetting, not facing?- I really like these lines in paticular. great poem. strong words! A++++
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