|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
He Destroys Me
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:56:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
|
Puffy cheeks, swollen eyes
Tale Tale signs of all his lies
Piece after piece of me dies
After the lowest lows and extreme highs-
He destroys me.
To hold me up just to let me fall
Gently ease through dishonesty when you call
Hugging my pillow and ranting to my wall
I hate the way it was everything or nothing at all-
He destroys me.
Today I lay on the floor in need
My wrists open waiting to bleed
Deception has planted the evil seed
My life or yours, only time for greed-
He destroys me.
Take it away, all my pain
Wash it down, down the drain
Forgiveness is easier under the rain
Friendship forever, violently slain-
He destroys me.
Copyright ©
xslashxprettyxskinx
... [
2004-08-05 01:56:31]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: He Destroys Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:03:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sad but written wwell.
Hang tuff, my friend.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
|
|
Re: He Destroys Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:27:17 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is extremely sad. The pain is all here, very vividly painted. Five stars for the poem, and a prayer that the light of the uncounted starry host may light up your path sometime very soon.
Blessings!
Andrew |
|
|
Re: He Destroys Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 05:34:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sad and tragic.......remember tho.....there is someone between you and he. That someone is thee!!!
Don't ever let anyone you know ever destroy you. They have no right to rob you of your joy. and the can't......only you can do that!
Don't let him.......he's not worth it!
Loved your very well written poem!
Poetic hugs
consue |
|
|
Re: He Destroys Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:46:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| beautiful i loove it nice flow nice write all together ***** amazing thank you i love al your writes and i love the pic on your porfiel to lol x grip |
|
|
Re: He Destroys Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 09:28:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yeah you for posting this!!!! It is raw emotion... I understand why you'd be hesitant to share this.
Painfully vivid... I honestly don't know how you managed it. I probably would have written "it hurts" and gotten stuck there. You did well and I'm glad you shared it.
Hoping the pain has eased...
SNM |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
