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Dead

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:26:32 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I am now dead
I died along time ago
Shortly after you did
I said I could not live without you
I have been given a chance
To look back at my life and
To see all the turning points
I went though so many changes
And I now know more than ever
That the only time I was ever alive
And not just existed was with you
The only way I was able to breath
Was though your mouth
When we kissed like we were more than friends
Even though you said, we were just that
I miss so much about you I do not know where to start
I miss all the things we did and just everything
I am dead now
I have been here, in this world where all have wings
And I have looked for you endlessly but I cannot now
I have not found you because you took your own life
Why you did I still do not know and always wonder
Was it because you never felt loved or needed
I wish I could have made you feel better
I wish I still had a chance to
I wish you knew how much I loved you
Because I did love you then and still do now
If I had told you, you would not have died for nothing
This soul of ours could not live torn in half

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-08-05 00:26:32]
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Re: Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 01:04:28 AM AEST
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That's a lovely poem

Well done

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