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No longer there
Contributed by
mrpeanut64
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:30:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wonder why I try,
I wonder why I care.
Why my heart still hungers
for a love no longer there.
I know the wish is foolish.
The dreams are naught but air.
But I can not shake these longings
for a love no longer there.
Each morning I wake up hopeful.
My soul once again lay bare.
Only to be cut to ribbons
by a love no longer there.
I try to gather the pieces,
and look to who knows where.
To find someone to fulfill
a love no longer there.
Instead I find but sorrow.
Out of reach this thing so rare.
For never can I replace
a love no longer there
Copyright ©
mrpeanut64
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2004-08-04 23:30:43]
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Re: No longer there
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by freespirit on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:58:35 PM AEST
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Great poem I also know the lose of a loved one they are forever loved and never forgoten
God Bless
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Re: No longer there
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:02:55 AM AEST
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I hear yaa loud aand cclear.
Haang tuff, huggs,
emy
aa masterpeeice. |
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Re: No longer there
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 12:21:31 AM AEST
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This is a great poem...i too know this pain...excellent job expressing it...great write
Lots of Love
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Re: No longer there
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 03:45:22 PM AEST
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A love no longer there.....how sad this verse is....masterfully penned emotions that come with a broken heart. Awesome verse.
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Re: No longer there
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 11:12:43 AM AEST
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| I read that and realized, as I revisited old wounds, they never do truly heal. You just become so accustomed to the way that they feel, that you're able to move on. Just like " An old football injury " or something. They STILL hurt. Very nice poem, thank you. |
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Re: No longer there
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by candysears on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:59:43 PM AEST
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Stay strong and know everything shall pass,
even the hurt and lost of a love one...
God Bless! |
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Re: No longer there
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 2nd January 2006 @ 01:33:19 PM AEST
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Well.... you had me with the author's note at the top of this piece! (smiles)
This is wonderful... heartbreakingly so. The repetition of the fourth line works very, very well here (and it is, repetition, hard to do well, I think). I enjoyed this very much.. though that moment of hard reality? that... I could do without.
Keep writing,
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Re: No longer there
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by MorguesMatter on
Saturday, 31st October 2009 @ 12:20:09 PM AEST
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| I hear it's better to have love and lost than to never have loved at all. your well depicted poem of this has left me to question for I could feel your pain-Morgues |
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