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hidden painting
Contributed by
luinil
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Abandoned gallery of obscure art
Songs of truth forgotten
Molded heroes crumbled apart
Painted life, distorted and rotten
Forbidden hall bathed in dark
Loneliest room nearly drained
Hangs one prophet’s unseen mark
Colors faded till luster waned
Untouched yet seemingly altered
Canvas of day and night
Entrancing the fierce, feared and faltered
Horrifying and beautiful sight
Stealing glimpse of life’s core
Instant to breathe and bleed together
Piercing ecstasy of time’s lore
Blindly discarded, veiled here forever
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-08-04 18:12:22]
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Re: hidden painting
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by Cesaria1 on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 07:48:31 PM AEST
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| beautiful writing. |
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Re: hidden painting
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by Dreama on
Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 12:05:27 PM AEST
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interesting one!
slightly hard for me to distinguish the metaphor but enjoyable to read! well done!
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