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Shadow
Contributed by
parkman
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Run from me, don’t look back
Your heart, frantic, exploding
Breathing erratic, gasping for air
Sweating profoundly, all over
Eyes bulging, blind fear
A single thought, survival
Escape my madness, as I catch you up
Smelling your fear, your losing control
Blind panic, keeping you going
But for how long, I move closer
Shadowing your every move
Hearing your every thought
Your energy drained, you drop
My cloak envelopes you, darkness
You draw your last breath, I smile
Master , we have another
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-08-04 16:42:50]
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Re: Shadow
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by anonymussme on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:47:45 PM AEST
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| awsomely written. creepy yet amazingly not, weird feeling. |
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Re: Shadow
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:21:46 PM AEST
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| O0o0o0o! Chilling! Great format for this poem. Always made you want to know what would happen next. |
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Re: Shadow
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:19:18 PM AEST
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| nice ending, modestly creepy--the Moth |
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Re: Shadow
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by secret-_girl_91 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:22:50 PM AEST
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Awesome simply awesome,you make me want to know what happens next.keep writing.
-Secret
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