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She is with him
Contributed by
zenmind
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:43:32 PM in AEST
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There are times that I forget reality
and live in dreams
where life becomes love and I am taken care of.
I forget that it is not this way
and I am alone.
Be here.
She is with him,
She is with him.
Don't expect things to be what they are not.
Remember,
that she is not with you
Accept it
Remember
that you are not that person for her.
This is reality.
Don't forget and fall
unitl your bones are broken
and your soul seeps through tattered flesh,
and your teeth grind into the hole that is still left
needing
Don't lose your soul
for the illusory satisfaction of this dream.
You are alone,
Don't forget
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Re: She is with him
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:56:22 PM AEST
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this was sad but you have written it well.great job
Brandy
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Re: She is with him
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by MacGyver_Dk on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:05:52 PM AEST
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| wow...I dont know what to say. Sounds like she took a part of you with her. Hold on to your memories, feelings and dreams of her. I hope u get together with her, but if its not in the stars, your memories for her, which are visually strong, will help and guide u in your transition from this life to the next.. Great write. Mac |
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Re: She is with him
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by slayer_015 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:07:58 PM AEST
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Your writing flows like a droning river.
Brian |
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Re: She is with him
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by Belinda on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:08:49 PM AEST
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| This pulled at my heart strings.....me being the romantic I am.....I believe you will love again, perhaps a bit more cautiously, but love you will nonetheless. Great poem. |
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Re: She is with him
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:16:49 PM AEST
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Don't forget and fall
unitl your bones are broken
and your soul seeps through tattered flesh,
and your teeth grind into the hole that is still left
needing
I love love love these lines. How much you depict here of longing and loss. It is an unbearable task to imagine getting on, yet you do. It lives in you, but you move on.
Nice job. |
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