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Ode to my rabbit
Contributed by
MDodgen
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:36:02 AM in AEST
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I saw you one day,
a white blur in the road.
I was so worried for you
I couldn't wait to take you home.
When I brought you home,
we loved you, took you out your cage.
How was I to know
this would only be a stage?
The first few years were wonderful,
you healthy and happy.
But then my life got busier,
you started doing poorly.
I didn't notice it at first,
and for this I feel so bad.
If I would have only seen,
maybe I wouldn't be so sad.
I tried so hard to help you,
I just didn't know what to do.
I finally fix one problem,
and up pop another two.
Today you had a siezure,
as I held you in my hands.
I felt my heart break,
please know this wasn't planned.
I realize your time is near,
I tell you that I care.
I'm glad you won't be in pain
but the sadness is too much to bear.
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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Re: Ode to my rabbit
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:40:36 AM AEST
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Awwwww this was a lovely write about your rabbit :):) you are sweet, your rabbit is very lucky to have you,
takecare
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Re: Ode to my rabbit
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:19:57 PM AEST
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This is so precious and sad. I had a bunny one time and I loved him so much. They are the sweetest pets. He and a kiten were roommates and the best of friends. They are very frail creatures and died at age 4. He sure was a sweetie though.
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Re: Ode to my rabbit
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 15th August 2004 @ 05:30:41 PM AEST
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Aww, Mel... I'm sorry to hear your bunny isn't doing well. (hugs to bunny!) We have a brand new Netherland Dwarf bunny at our house (my daughter's birthday present). I'm already way too in love with that silly little bunny (who's name- lol! - is "Bunny").
Thinking you were both lucky to have found each other,
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Re: Ode to my rabbit
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:14:46 PM AEST
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awwwww.............
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Ode to my rabbit
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:43:22 PM AEST
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Your poem brought tears to my eyes. I own a bunny who's a year and a half old and she's my everything,so believe me when I tell you I understand what you're feeling.I couldn't imagine my life without her,much less her having a seizure while I couldn't do anything.Instead I'm the one having seizures while she licks my feet. And when I wake up from them,I always see her face and it brings my spirits up,so she must feel the same way towards you.It's never really goodbye,heaven reserves a special place for us alongside our pets.I'm just so sorry you have to go through this.Hang in there and beautifully written,
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Re: Ode to my rabbit
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:44:49 PM AEST
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Check out my baby bunny in my poem entitled "Ode to Bundles".
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