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Poetic Pimp
Contributed by
emeraldeyes
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:00:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you really come online
to check out the rythym and rhyme?
Or is that just an afterthought...
how many numbers have you got?
Did you leave that comment about
how I could get anyone without a doubt
because you heard what I had to say,
or are you just tryin' to pimp today?
I don't really care about my eyes and hair;
if you want cyber-love, you need to go somewhere.
I'm really not that interested, and if I had a choice,
instead of this screen, I'd tell you with my voice.
So, go on, you fool, be a poetic pimp on someone else's site...
Get your girl, but remember: I'm the one who said take a hike.
Copyright ©
emeraldeyes
... [
2004-08-04 11:00:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Poetic Pimp
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:52:19 PM AEST (User
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well said!
who needs to go out with people like that 'coz at the end of the day they're proberly some fat old git with an intension to rape women!
this poem was very good!
keep 'em comming. |
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