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Ocean's love
Contributed by
scorpion
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:03:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The stream of my feelings hovers over my shoulders,
As my blue eyes shudder under the covers.
A thousand tears under my eyes can not stop,
As they prepare to hide among the lot.
A rainbow of stars among the brisk, cool breeze,
Greets me upon the ocean's folding trees.
Crashing to the ocean's blanket of time,
My eyes dance within all that is mine.
My love is strong,
Strong as one.
Come my ocean, to the fallen sun,
Where dreams are made into one.
What I see, comes upon the sun,
Thousand of stars folding by the ton.
My tears are falling upon the ocean,
While screaming out in love's great potion.
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scorpion
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2004-08-04 09:03:47]
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Re: Ocean's love
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 09:09:20 AM AEST
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Oh whoa I liked this a lot. Very powerful and full of deep feeling! I enjoyed it a lot. I like the way the verses run nicely into eachother. Good write.
Corinna |
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Re: Ocean's love
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by brew on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:08:25 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful write............Such need and meaning , and great flow! |
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Re: Ocean's love
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by silent_wolf_tear on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 02:02:11 AM AEST
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| wow, what a way to say a lot with just a little amount of words i loved this very powerful, thankyou for sharing ~silent_wolf_tear |
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