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Snowy River
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:09:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Looking out my window, beneath the deep blue sky
My eyes come upon something amazing,
As it temps me to want to try
Try to capture the picture, in all its wonderful delight
But I do not think today, is the one where I have reached that height
Oh but how I would like to paint it and capture its pure white coat,
As it silkily dresses the river in a beautiful over-coat
Well I might just give it a try
And if it’s nothing like it,
At least I will have captured, what looks down above it
In the deep blue clouds of the sky
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SweetRhythm
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2004-08-04 08:09:29]
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Re: Snowy River
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by WinterFawn on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:48:36 AM AEST
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You painted a very beautiful picture with your words. Lovely verse.
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Re: Snowy River
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:30:49 PM AEST
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What beautiful scenery. I think it would entice anyone to want to capture it either on canvas or on film. Sometimes we just have to settle for memories or an artist putting it to words, like you.
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Re: Snowy River
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by candysears on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 06:00:53 PM AEST
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You capture the picture beautifully...Great write
God Bless! |
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