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Bitter Days
Contributed by
A_Corseted_Heart
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:45:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Still reeling from childhoods of discontent
We drank away our youth
Now solemnly basking in life’s remains
Are these crystal midnights just the calm before the storm
or have we finally broken these numbing chains
I have long awaited realities bitter sting
Something only time can bring
Too many fears of self-doubt turned into years of self-loathing
Just now knowing you were the wolf in sheep’s clothing
It was always you...
Your hands covering my eyes so I could not see
Now coming to gripes with this...
You are the vicious cycle in me
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A_Corseted_Heart
... [
2004-08-04 07:45:07]
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Re: Bitter Days
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:02:19 AM AEST
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You have a beautiful compostion style that you have made your own. This is a wonderful poem. Great write.
Kimberly :) |
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Re: Bitter Days
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:17:16 AM AEST
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| excellent poem i like it i liek ur style to i,d liek to see more xgripx |
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Re: Bitter Days
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by Adrianna on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:42:56 AM AEST
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| You are a really good writer. I love your style. I love this poem too, it reminds me of so many things. |
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