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2 seconds 2 late
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:19:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Together forever till it all ends,
We’d always be the best of friends,
But then I found I was living a lie,
And now I sit alone and cry,
I thought I meant the world,
But illusions cloud my vision,
You’re different from me, I’m just a girl,
And now my hearts decision,
Will I live this lie forever?
And think I’m part of the crowd,
Or take a knife and be clever,
And end this distortion out loud,
But then I begin to think,
Will they even know I’m gone?
With this thought I start to sink,
And with a final empathy I’m torn,
I took the blade and look to the skies,
With moonlight gleaming down,
I whipped the tears from my eyes,
And ended it without a sound,
Bloodstained sheets will haunt your dreams,
For could have you changed my fate?
Is what you caused what it seems?,
How you came 2 seconds too late
Copyright ©
corrupted_minds
... [
2004-08-04 05:19:07]
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Re: 2 seconds 2 late
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:35:22 AM AEST
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| beautiful... |
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Re: 2 seconds 2 late
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:41:42 AM AEST
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very sad and moving, great poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: 2 seconds 2 late
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by Row on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:03:16 AM AEST
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| ur a real good writter loz |
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Re: 2 seconds 2 late
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:41:28 AM AEST
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Very sad sentiments but a great write none the less. You have good talent.
Hope all is not so gray and the sun comes out to brighthen up your day!
Corinna |
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Re: 2 seconds 2 late
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:21:37 AM AEST
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WOW all that emotion
goes to show.....
each second counts hey? |
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Re: 2 seconds 2 late
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:47:49 PM AEST
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another excellent piece!
it's amazing! |
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