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Visions Of The Night, I Surrender
Contributed by
TheBlackVoid
on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:16:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Please God somebody hear me, please take away this suffering, end my undieing pain
Dry my eyes, save them from the salty drops of rain
Don't let the sun go down, don't break the light of day
Make the moon die out, stop night from comming, take my sight away
Do something, anything, to stop the visions
Stop the constant replay of my wrong decisions
Take my memory, do anything to make me forget
I'm tired of crying, of being scared, help me, because i'm tired of it
My life brings me nothing but pain, why am i here? what is my purpose? what do you expect from me?
There are no words on the face of this earth to explain the things i see
When i'm alone in bed at night, there is nobody there to comfort me
Why did you do those things to me?
My life is now lived in nothing but misery
People say all the time " oh i understand" but do they really?
Do they have even the slightest idea of the things i see?
There are times when i'm ready to give it all up, and attempt to take my life again
Then i realize, what i'm leaving behind, so i tell myself , "No i'm not giving up, i refuse to let you win"
Over the years i have been through a lot, and each day it gets harder for me
But i have to face the facts, only my own courage will set me free
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TheBlackVoid
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2004-08-04 03:16:21]
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Re: Visions Of The Night, I Surrender
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by 01_zanzebar on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:21:50 AM AEST
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i enjoyed that loads, the wording and the layout were all brilliant and very well thought out i feel. i think if you made it any longer, it would of been too much, not bad i do say, 3.5/5
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Re: Visions Of The Night, I Surrender
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:27:59 AM AEST
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WOW ! The images that just formed in my mind ... Wow ! I ... uhm ... I'll come back when my speach returns .... wow.
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