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Burning Soul With Tears Of Fire
Contributed by
TheBlackVoid
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Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:14:26 AM in AEST
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Tears that flow profusely from my eyes burn as if they were made of liquid flame
The constant replay of my past, the hate, the tears, the rage, and oh such shame
When you cry, isn't there supposed to be relief?
I find that kinda of funny, because the more i cry, the more i find greif
The more i desire happiness, the more i find myself burried in pain and sorrow
Every night i lay down and close my eyes i ask why, why does there have to be tomorrow?
I wish i could wake up on night and see past the darkness surrounding me
To open my eyes and find peace, to see everything clearly
I wish i could wake up reach out and grab somthing other than air
To open my eyes and know somebody will be there
I feel as though i have fallin deeply into this huge black void
I am here physically, but as for emontionally, i am destroyed
Sometimes i feel like i'm screaming, screaming in pain, screaming for help, but there isn't anyone there
I wish for once i felt alive, but i forgot, nobody understands me, they dont even care
Every night i close my eyes and i pray to just disappear
Then i wake up the next day and realize, i'm still here
No matter where i go, who i'm with, or what i'm doing, in the end its just me
This is my life, my sad reality
People have tried to help, and they failed, everything remains the same
I am a tortured lost soul, and i shall never be claimed
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TheBlackVoid
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2004-08-04 02:14:26]
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Re: Burning Soul With Tears Of Fire
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by kyletycz on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:22:49 AM AEST
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i loved this poem, i know how you feel also, i can be in a room of 100 people, and still feel like im in the middle of the blackest hole immaginable, i think the worst type of solitude, is when you are alone and surrounded by others, even when im with my closest freinds i still feel like no one even notices me, i just hope you come to realize there are people who care, as i have, and i hope that you use this apparent writing tallent to aid others also...... nice writing
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Re: Burning Soul With Tears Of Fire
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:31:00 AM AEST
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great poem your expressions here are wonderful I at times feel this way but its different than what I think your speaking of here your never alone though you may at times feel like it
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