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Polka Dots on Mondays
Contributed by
thumbsucker
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Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 06:47:33 AM in AEST
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She`s wearing polka dots on Mondays,
when lately she`s just been wearing blue.
It seems like a month of Sundays,
since her worries were bid adieu.
She`s going back to the card store,
mostly to read the verses there.
She`s buying ice cream cones once more.
She`s breathing in the morning air.
She`s making calls, long overdue,
mending friendships that were ignored.
She feeds the monkeys at the zoo.
She looks at clothes she can`t afford.
She`s singing Julie Andrews songs
and buying flowers for herself.
She`s decided to fix some wrongs
and leave some grudges on the shelf.
Her life`s back on course, all rearranged.
Dread`s been replaced with gratitude.
The colors of her world have changed,
since she voved to change her attitude.
Copyright ©
thumbsucker
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2002-07-17 06:47:33]
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Re: Polka Dots on Mondays
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 08:20:33 AM AEST
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The title really grabbed me and the poem didn't let me go till the end...loved it Gary
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Re: Polka Dots on Mondays
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by Thumbsucker on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 08:44:11 AM AEST
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Thanks again Chrissie,
I should really proof read more instead of being in such a hurry to press that friggin` Ok! button.
Gary |
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Re: Polka Dots on Mondays
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 11:44:07 AM AEST
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This is a nice write... and I love the extra tidbits on the top lol ;-) By the way thanks for your support of my work.. I appreciate it!
Daniela |
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Re: Polka Dots on Mondays
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 02:57:41 PM AEST
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I agree with Chrissie. This poem rocks! Sounds like me after I finally got out of a relationship that should've been done years ago. (and yes, I know I'm only 17... but even young people make mistakes.) I LOVE your work... and it does seem really in tune with the stuff that I write... (like you said earlier). Talk to you at your next poem... :)
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Re: Polka Dots on Mondays
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by LJ on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 12:49:08 AM AEST
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Great write Thumb.
I was thinking about you and needed a good giggle, so came to read some of your stuff, ended up reading it all!
_LJ |
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Re: Polka Dots on Mondays
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2010 @ 11:54:42 PM AEST
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| I guess voved is a typo? Anyways, pretty cool poem and I also love the author's note. |
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