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AND THEN.......I WOKE UP !
Contributed by
gina
on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 05:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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As i followed this light
leading to a maze
for minutes i was bright
with the mirors to gaze
reflecting the fight
in my soul and more...the blaze
he was there at my sight
the man i tried to erase!
Forgivness i may ask
wishing to be heard
i became unmasked
no more games no more dirt
if we forget the past....
those were his words
I wanted to blow up
but instead i leaned
my heart it tored up
as strong as it seemed
he wanted to make up
and stay on the beam
he's really back on top
we reconstruct our realm
no one could corrupt
the flames of the scene
i was glad i cheered up
i felt the joy supreme...
and then..........i woke up
oh! what a dream!!!
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-10-30 05:40:00]
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Re: AND THEN.......I WOKE UP !
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:41:13 AM AEST
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| good write! Keep them coming |
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Re: AND THEN.......I WOKE UP !
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by Opium on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 05:15:36 AM AEST
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| I read your poem and I feel something deep inside of me, but still can't define what it is, and then I woke up! mihhhhhhhh |
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