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Kill Me
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:16:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Kill Me
Freeze me
My energy
I'm my enemy
Use my energy
Against me
Make me bleed
My energy
Make me see
My energy
Make me be
Against my enemy
Burn me
To save me
Kill me
To save me
I die free
To save thee
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Essentially9
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2004-08-03 23:16:57]
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Re: Kill Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:37:44 AM AEST
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nice take on life, i found this quite an interesting write, keep up the good work
l8r
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Re: Kill Me
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:58:16 PM AEST
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very diffrent ..i like the flow and how you put it all down..Good write..
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Re: Kill Me
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:30:46 PM AEST
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gets right to the point
you did good |
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