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By The
Contributed by
KiLLeR_pHyScO_999
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:04:39 PM in AEST
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By the look on your face,
The absence of a smile.
By the long,boring pace,
I knew I'd be here a while.
I asked what was wrong,
Why you seemd so sad.
You said I knew it wasnt long,
Before my soul went *bad*.
*bad meaning like unkind and uncaring....
which was exactly how matt was being to me*
By.::::. Charlee
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KiLLeR_pHyScO_999
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2004-08-03 23:04:39]
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Re: By The
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:37:04 AM AEST
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No poem is truly 'stupid'. Get used to the fact that some part inside of you feels a little better having shown this to someone else, and someone like me has taken the time out of their lives in some distant part of this revolving rock to show you so.
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Re: By The
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by thewordzwithin on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 06:34:34 PM AEST
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| Like someone already said, no poem is stupid. Trust me, I know how bad a broken heart hurts. I'm going through it right now. Nothing is like it, but the upside is it helps you to write masterpieces like this. Keep up the good work. And if you still think it's stupid, know that I like it. (Maybe you should read The Path That Laid Before Me, a great source of inspiration I've been told from people) Hope to hear from you! Holla Front!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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