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Without
Contributed by
KiLLeR_pHyScO_999
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:58:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I trusted you,
I gave you my heart.
And what did you do?
You tore it apart.
All I wanted was love,
Someone to care about.
And once again,*like a gift from above*,
Its trust Im without.
*this is me being sarcastic.....not very good huhs?*
By.::::::.Charlee
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KiLLeR_pHyScO_999
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2004-08-03 22:58:35]
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Re: Without
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 02:34:12 AM AEST
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I don't know - I'd say its rhymed better than most in here, Kille-uh, Charlee.
Nice name. Keep writing - and welcome. |
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Re: Without
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 10:07:51 AM AEST
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| i liek this one and the other poem excellent writs short but sweet and it flows very well thank you xgripx |
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