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Rockin out at your show.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:56:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The music plays the band on stage
The crowd a roar the band and fans engage
The band plays the tunes for all to hear
The other's rockin out yet there's nothing to fear
The mosh pit for the savage
The seats like a back seat carriage
The lights and special affects all for an awe
The music is what gets you to jump like a super bouncy ball
I cant describe a more better time
Than rockin to music thats oh so fine
No need for a useless Narcotic
I couldnt be more happy jammin to a tune thats oh so sick
As I watch my idols jam
Bon Jovi and Adam Lazzara just a few of many im such a fan
One day To be like them
Never to stop untill I am
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heartfilledblood
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2004-08-03 21:56:23]
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Re: Rockin out at your show.
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by shorty_52 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:25:58 PM AEST
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nice babe. writen very good. keep up the good work.
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Re: Rockin out at your show.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 11:29:11 PM AEST
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I like it Daric. You can feel the energy that builds in you at a concert. The frenetic energy that just has to come out in movement and sound. Great write, my friend.
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Re: Rockin out at your show.
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by longforgottenlove on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:41:36 PM AEST
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i love concerts they are just about the only place i am completely comfortable i can just dance like a crazy fool and not give a damn as long as i'm having fun hehe so coachella was the best ever for me 48 hours of straight tunes man sickest ***** man
much love,
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