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Help me!!!
Contributed by
Lilkrazybaby6
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:29:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Grab my hand save me before its too late!
I've been left alone to drown in my sarrrow which holds my fate...
Whats left for me?
What is there out there for me?
All hope is lost,
All my feelings were tossed,
How can you do that to a person you call "your best friend?"
"Oh yeh, I'll always be there til the end"
Ok....so where were you that month when i needed you?
I didn't see you.
Huh? yeh thats what I though!
After all the feelings I thought I fought
There not there anymore just everyonce in a while they come back to haunt me
They were at once even beating me
but not no more
Copyright ©
Lilkrazybaby6
... [
2004-08-03 18:29:33]
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Re: Help me!!!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:37:40 PM AEST
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i like it! i know how you feel, and it hurts. very honest, emotional poem...nice
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Re: Help me!!!
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by Butterflyperfect on
Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 02:06:57 PM AEST
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| people hurt you and turn their back on you and it hurts. I can relate. it is also good to remember you are strong enough to stand alone in this situation, because it will be in the time of crisis that your true friends will be revealed. Good Emotional poem. |
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