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We are hailing each other
Contributed by
david
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:50:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We are hailing each other
like two trains passing
at night
whistling salute on line,
online, line
by line dot
by dot shade
by shade
we transfer ourselves
across to be resurrected
in the lap of each other.
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david
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2004-08-03 14:50:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: We are hailing each other
(User Rating: 1 ) by youlied on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:34:29 PM AEST (User
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I really like how this is written, I'll definitely be reading more of your poems... |
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