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Freestyle prose
Contributed by
zenmind
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:15:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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CD Wallet,
blue hat,
scattered faces,
Where is the new arrival?
When does it change time?
How many dreams have been forgotten
only to return every night to the same blank stare?
I've seen future dreams in my past regrets
and tragically laugh at the pin pointed portion dot
----last night we knew-----
Beyond my doubt there is music and harmony
My doubt only forces fake desires and memories to tremble in my mind
blank again
I'm beginning to remember my childhood
-----false memories------
Only dreams can speak to one's fears
and our memories only speak as reminders.
But this is not a memory,
It is happening now with regrets waiting to speak.
Don't forget to try and slow down the pace.
Don't forget that nothing has happened by mistake.
And don't forget that every mistake is an action chosen for truth.
Before you sleep,
remember the faces scattered,
and the blue hat, wrinkled,
and the cd wallet, new
Copyright ©
zenmind
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2004-08-03 14:15:04]
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Re: Freestyle prose
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:25:56 PM AEST
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Don't forget to try and slow down the pace.
Don't forget that nothing has happened by mistake.
And don't forget that every mistake is an action chosen for truth
I thought this was meaningful writing. Well done. |
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Re: Freestyle prose
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 04:20:29 PM AEST
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| well written. very good. |
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Re: Freestyle prose
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:31:37 AM AEST
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I like this alot
michelle |
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Re: Freestyle prose
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by slayer_015 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:11:04 PM AEST
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Great job man,I enjoyed this poem,awesome work.
Brian |
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