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Rejection
Contributed by
black_angel
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:37:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Rejection
Tears me up
Bursts my cup
Rejection
Makes me cry
Lets out a sigh
Rejection
Steals my sleep
Becomes a creep
Rejection
Is a thing
I cannot sing
Rejection
Hates my love
From up above
Rejection
Don't haunt me
Let me be
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black_angel
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2004-08-03 13:37:37]
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Re: Rejection
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by jenny21614 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:36:34 PM AEST
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I love the way your poem is short, sweet, and to the point. Sums up hurt feelings without a whole bunch of big words and fancy lingo. Great job!
-jen. |
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Re: Rejection
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 07:45:59 PM AEST
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| Another very effective write. Keep up the good writing.--Mothy |
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