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Listen To Your Dreams
Contributed by
macgyver_dk
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:04:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have waken from this dream,
You have been here all along so it seems,
A vision of my mortality,
The Gods must of heard my inner screams,
Time has seen to just stand still,
Its amazing how good this does feel,
Were a product of our wishes upon the stars,
I never knew love could feel so real,
You have placed your hands on my soul,
You left an impression from my head to my toes,
Desires hot enough to ingite the sun,
Were two rivers joined, together our love will flow,
I want to take us into outer space,
So we can be all alone, In our own deeply place,
I want to cruise the milky way with you,
And light the heavens with the beauty of your face,
We could go star hopping,
Outer limits, there would be no stopping,
We could fly pass heaven, and wave,
With Gods angel by my side, I would be flawnting:)
You are the air that I breath,
And your true love I do need,
I would give my last air for you,
So you could continue to be,
I want to fly to the heavens with you,
I want to spend life and eterinty with you,
My new found Angel,
I will always love you!!!!
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macgyver_dk
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2004-08-03 13:04:21]
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Re: Listen To Your Dreams
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by zenmind on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 02:32:23 PM AEST
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| It's great that you have someone that you feel this way about. This is something that a lot of people wish they had. Cherish it, because you do not know what the future holds. Also this is a very imaginitive poem. Good job with being original while still talking about something that is universal. |
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Re: Listen To Your Dreams
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by MacGyver_Dk on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:01:52 PM AEST
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| i am reshea, timmy's girfiend,, isn't it great to finallly meet your true love after so many years of struggles in life itself!!!! finally i am truely happy with timmy and i will never forget this poem or him . hope the very best for all of you that have what i have finally in my life!!! thanks |
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