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missing you
Contributed by
hopelessromantic
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:43:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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every night i sit and wonder
how it would have been
if we would have never parted
if my heart will ever mend
you brought so much out of me
its hard to shove it all back in
every day since you have left
i have been so grim
i cry myself to sleep at night
wishing you were here
cuz now your far away from me
but you used to be so near
i poured my heart and soul to you
and you comforted me well
but now that im lying here without you
my heavens turned to hell
i miss the days we used to have
your arms around my hips
and i remember when you would give
your sweet, enchanting kiss
but now those days are gone
they've floated to the past
i just cant believe your gone now
it happened all too fast
i see the couples hand in hand
walking down the hall
as they start to kiss
i begin to miss
the times you used to call
all of our memories
still play like a movie
playing in my mind
as i sit here i think to myself
i cant leave you behind
you were my everything
you were the perfect man for me
i cant believe i let you go
how stupid could i be?!
i still love you
i wont ever let you go
i wrote this cuz im a wreck without you
and i thought that i should let you know
im missin you...........
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2004-08-03 10:43:46]
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Re: missing you
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:26:47 PM AEST
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| You did a really good job on this one...I know it feels. |
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Re: missing you
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:42:54 PM AEST
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Ahhh.. you conveyed your loneliness and longing for this person very well in this poem. Great write......thanks for sharing your heart..
Jenni |
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Re: missing you
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:40:30 PM AEST
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This is very creatively written. You should let him read this. You must have loved him deeply. Welcome!
Kimberly :) |
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