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Surrendered
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:00:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the quiet of the morning,
or at noon when hell breaks loose;
or when silent evenings offer
little more than an excuse;
or at night, when sleep directs my mind
to dreams to be remembered;
‘tis then the spirit claims there’s no escape:
the heart is there to be surrendered.
G.B.A. 20 March 2003
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Re: Surrendered
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by arden on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:26:14 PM AEST
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ok this deserve lots of comments and reads.
this was so utterly amazing. there was so very little written but alot said.
this was a beautiful touching poem.
i love it.
5 stars
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Re: Surrendered
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 02:43:56 PM AEST
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| excellent. it is so beautifully stated in a few words- often times a hard concept for us poets to grap, how to paint a picture beautifully and descriptively in just a few lines. often times works such as this are very powerful because of its simplicity but attention to detail. |
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