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Falling Into You
Contributed by
Alli
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:54:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the pools of blue ocean that serve as your eyes
I swim through the current and start to realize
The feeling I have now, as deep as the sea
I've never before felt this, in all honesty
Your voice is like music that fills up my head
Your soul is a mystery, a book not yet read
The touch of your hand can drive me insane
The taste of your lips is like sweet summer rain
And just when I think you're too good to be true
I find a new reason to fall into you.
2004
Copyright ©
Alli
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2004-08-03 09:54:07]
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Re: Falling Into You
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:24:55 AM AEST
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"sensational", that was superbly devine, such heart melting sentiments. Turly delighful romantic sweet poem. Excellent write, you have great talent and it shines through in this write. What a lovely enjoyable read. 5/5 I just loved it. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Falling Into You
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by hopelessromantic on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 10:29:13 AM AEST
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| your poem was very well written. you put your emotions in the right words it was a very good piece. |
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Re: Falling Into You
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:31:43 PM AEST
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Sweet and romantic....loved this...
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