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Suicidal Images.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:20:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I should be feeling happy,
'Coz i'm all alone in this house.
I wanted to stay here,
I didn't want to go out.
But the silence alone,
Is enough for me.
Then there's occasional thoughts,
That send me back into my scary dreams.
Every time i sit still,
I remember some thing more.
This depression is making me ill!
... Just like before!
It's crazy, the things I see.
They fufil, yet over whelm me!
They're mostly memories of my morbid past.
But the rest are dreams, in suicidal blasts.
I don't know why,
I'm getting these today.
Any other day,
I'd be o'k.
Today i'm deprest,
And feeling like ****!
My life's a mess,
... I'm about to flip!
I'm just crying alone,
In this dark home.
Silence is booming,
And thses images are moving.
I'm blowing in hate,
But I don't want to escape!
'Coz the out side world,
Carries my frightning twirls!!!
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Re: Suicidal Images.
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:23:26 AM AEST
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| sad but you expressed this well..i hope you can get out of this depression. i'm here if you need someone to talk to. |
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Re: Suicidal Images.
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:34:24 AM AEST
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you write poetry so nicely....
hope the images will go away....
pity you feel this way ....
hope your depression will go away okay....
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Re: Suicidal Images.
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by MomentInTime on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:34:10 AM AEST
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One way or another each of us has a past which, if allowed to enter our present, will shatter it; each of us has a 360 degree reality. It may appear to be all darkness, yet somewhere in there there's a light - it's a case of searching until it's found.
I agree with you: you should be happy.
Jordan |
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Re: Suicidal Images.
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:41:43 PM AEST
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You're a victim of your own - right now... We all have our fears and demons. The good thing is you are seeking freedom. It may be hard but take the next step. Only you can set yourself free. Your poem is very expressive. Good luck.
J~ |
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Re: Suicidal Images.
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:03:24 AM AEST
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All your poems show true beauty of words. I can relate to your work so well.. thank you for sharing this.
love always
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