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I cut but with no relief
Contributed by
corrupted_minds
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:00:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I cut myself but with no relief,
It makes me no more than a freak,
It brings more people pain and grief,
And proves I’m lonely, small and weak
I hide my face and roam the night,
In the shadows of the city,
Knowing what I do isn’t right,
I drown in my own self-pity,
Grievance lurks in quiet places,
You feel it in the wind,
All you see is empty faces,
Each one who knows you sinned,
I wallow in my own mess,
Blood is spilt around,
I’ll burn, but at least I confess,
My knife is still on the ground,
I never go the whole way,
I want good pain, not death,
But how I feel another day,
Will determine every breath,
If God you are so potent,
Then why not answer my prayer,
Through torture and pain I went,
And you weren’t even there,
But tonight was not what I meant,
Both wrists are cut right deep,
You made me cause this accident,
But now in peace I’ll sleep
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2004-08-03 06:00:34]
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:08:05 AM AEST
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| loz u got skill, but i feel a lot more comfortable when u write happy stuff, hope ur alright |
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 06:22:55 AM AEST
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I LOVE YOUR POEM!
... i just wish that i was the person in this... |
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by anonymussme on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:24:41 PM AEST
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| this is a very powerful poem at least to me, and as a recovering cutter myself i can relate so it makes it even better. good job |
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:34:23 PM AEST
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very deep and emotional write, i can relate very well,
great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:16:35 PM AEST
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This is an amazing poem....I can relate to this all too well...i know what it feels like...great poem...if u ever want to talk feel free to PM me
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by Dizza_13 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:21:42 AM AEST
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Great write loz. This is one of my favourites of all your
poems.
Dizza |
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by Gothik_Twitch on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 05:09:51 AM AEST
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| That sounds like my life. i do cut, it used to give me realease. now it doesnt. i love your poem. girlll..or guy...dude...hmmm. Keep writningl your peotry gets to me somehow. |
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Re: I cut but with no relief
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by RavenMarieKrashauna on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:54:43 AM AEST
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| This poem really hits home for me. I've been a victim of self mutilation since I was a young child. I know how it feels to be labeled a freak and feel like no one understands the pain that feeds this need to cut. |
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