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What can you share if there's nothing there?
Contributed by
Row
on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 05:44:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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All these people crying
It only leads the heart to dying
So wipe your eyes clean
See what life could mean
Know how to live it
And you'll believe it
Don't let it take all
Cos boy you know it'll just fall
Happy for what you've got
Not sad for what your not
No point trying to understand it all
Tell what's next after you've made that call
Why waste away time hurled
Feeling sorry for the people of this world
What can you share
If there's nothing there?
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Row
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2004-08-03 05:44:06]
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Re: What can you share if there's nothing there?
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by BrandySwanson on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 07:36:55 AM AEST
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I'm so glad I came across this poem you have wrote some true words here and thats what I needed to hear. I need to stop crying and see what life could really mean.
All these people crying
It only leads the heart to dying
So wipe your eyes clean
See what life could mean
Happy for what you've got
Not sad for what your not
No point trying to understand it all
Tell what's next after you've made that call
thanks alot for sharing this poem
Brandy
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Re: What can you share if there's nothing there?
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 09:07:54 AM AEST
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I agree with most of what you said. It is a positive attitude.
But at the same time I strongly believe there is a time for everything, even tears.
The key is to make it thru those tears and build towards life and living.
Until you've been in another persons shoes it is hard to have sympathy, empathy or understanding but when something traumatic happens it not only humbles you, you do feel for others because you know how bad it hurts inside.
I enjoyed this poem immensely.
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