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Soulless
Contributed by
dizza_13
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Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:04:04 AM in AEST
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Love and hate it all the same,
In the end they both lead to pain,
All they do is eat you up inside,
You try to hide but you it will find.
Where were you God?
When I was lost,
You say happiness comes at no cost,
But all they say is a lie,
Your only happy when you die.
But someone saw my tears and pain,
Satan came in a ball of flame,
He took my soul and set me free,
He dried the sea of tears I had made.
That’s right God,
The little boy you left to die,
Has found a way to soar and fly.
I never needed a holy land,
All I needed was a helping hand,
You said you’d always be there for me,
But instead you left me out at sea,
I was left alone,
But now the way I have been shown.
All who read this take heed,
I may be soulless,
But I’m free.
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dizza_13
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2004-08-03 03:04:04]
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Re: Soulless
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:09:35 AM AEST
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| Yeah this is a really good poem. Sorry my comments not very good it's a awesome poem just not having the best time at the moment.. holding problems of my own. |
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Re: Soulless
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by Row on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 03:20:33 AM AEST
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| sean showed u suckers! |
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Re: Soulless
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 08:16:53 AM AEST
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Its very well written, but Im having a hard time reading that someone has that much loss of faith when I am filled so much with it. Im sorry you feel this way, but if you content than good for you. Take care
Kimberly :) |
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